You have just rented an unfurnished flat and a friend has told you that the opportunity shop is the shopping centre has cheap secondhand furniture. Write to the shop, owner, describing what you need and asking whether they have this items and what they cost.
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing to ask for some basic information that can help me in the future shopping at your shop.
I am an international student. I rented an apartment so I am seeking some good quality furniture. I’m looking for an adjustable gaming chair, a sofa set, and a tiny table. As I heard from lots of people about the solid durability of your products, it seems like a trustable brand.
This
morning, I got to know about a scheme of 35% sale on everything at your store from the advertisement in a newspaper. My friend also
told me yesterday that most of the stock is sold due to
ongoing sale
. Fix the agreement mistake
sales
Therefore
, I want to ask if these items mentioned earlier are in stock or not.
As far as I know, your creations are always in demand and fall in luxury collections. It would be easy for me to calculate my budget if I could know the price of the products I am searching for.
Looking forward to your response,
Yours faithfully,
DKSubmitted by pateldhruvi038 on
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task achievement
The letter would benefit from a bit more specificity. For example, including the dimensions or color preferences for the furniture can add clarity to your request.
coherence cohesion
The paragraph structure is generally good, but the second paragraph can be split into two for better readability: one focusing on the items needed and another on the sale inquiry.
task achievement
You have maintained a formal and polite tone throughout the letter, which is appropriate for this context.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are done well, contributing to its overall professionalism.