Some people believe that it is good to share as much information as possible in scientific research, business and the academic world. Others believe that some information is too important or too valuable to be shared freely. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

Nowadays, there

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been a substantial amount of

information

whether it is crucial or not important. Some citizens think that the

information

which

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technology, financial and education should be shared to over the world.

However

, those who

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that documentaries are vital should not be widespread freely. In my view, I agree with

this

statement that the

information

must exposure for learning in real life and

also

will discuss two both these views. On the one side, vast amounts of

data

assist people to track real situations immediately. Some

information

is adopted to develop a livelihood and

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with changing of the environments at present.

For example

, the statistic of

metrological

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the metrological

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department in Thailand, where provides the

data

of sea level, the volume of water has higher than the

last

year because it’s has been constantly all day.

This

is the cause of flooding in each land, so Thai citizens look for the other countries

data

in

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the internet

for

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manufacture a new innovation to prevent

this

cause.

Therefore

, much

information

which is

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without purchase these

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a benefit

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benefit

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to improve living.

On the other hand

,

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financial

information

should not reveal to

public

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the public

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. These

data

are greatly essential and underground of personality.

For instance

, my friend was stolen the financial

data

on

database

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a database

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of

bank

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the bank

a bank

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by

hacker

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a hacker

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, so her money disappears from

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a bank

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account.

Hence

, some knowledge

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is shared on online platforms should not access easily because it will come across

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drawback to users. To summarize,

this

information

is extremely useful to sustainable development in human beings and animals. Indeed, it must have the safeguard to protect

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personal

data

.