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Writing Samples
Band 7

One of your penfriends wants to improve their English at a language school. They have never studied at a language school before and have asked for your advice on how to choose a good one. write a letter to your penfriend, Advise them about the following; the teaching method,the number of students in class and the number of hours per week. write 150 words

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Dear Jade, Hope
this
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 letter of mine finds you in good health. I am extremely delighted by the news that
finally
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 you are opting the way of dialect school for your English improvement. Eventually, finding a good one is a task. In my opinion, you should go for the school which boosts confidence and
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 accepts the students as they are in their language representation. After that on the list is another quality, the school which has more interactive and student-friendly teaching methods. If a language teaching institution has these two qualities, you can
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 check about their class size, preferably not too many students in one class
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so the tutor can focus on each and every learner. And if we discuss the learning schedule, five hours a week are
abundance
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 to escalate the learning experience for upgrading your English skills. I hope
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 knowledge of mine will help you find a good institution for redefining your skills. Warm wishes ABC

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Coherence and Cohesion
To improve the logical structure, make sure to organize your ideas clearly and connect them smoothly. Use linking words to enhance the flow between sentences and paragraphs.
Coherence and Cohesion
Each paragraph should focus on a single idea. While your letter generally adheres to this, ensure that you fully develop each idea with examples or further explanation.
Task Achievement
Your task response is good, but try to provide more specific guidance based on the prompt, such as detailing why fewer students in a class might be beneficial or what teaching methods are preferable.
Task Achievement
The writing tone is suitable, reflecting a friendly and helpful attitude towards your pen friend. Keep this consistent throughout the letter.
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