Scientist and technology experts seem to be more valued by modern society than musicians and artist. To what extent do you agree.

With the advancement of
science
and
technology
, there is no doubt that modern society values scientists more than musicians and artists. I agree with
this
notion and will substantiate my reasoning in the course of
this
essay. Well for starters,
Science
and
technology
is a continually advancing field, and it is important for that the facilities
also
to be equipped to handle the constant changes.
This
is why governments put more funding into research outposts so that they can have a better understanding of the world that we live in to be able to track any future diseases.
For instance
, the current pandemic is a perfect example of
this
. If no money was put into research, many countries would not have the vaccines readily available at
such
notice.
On the other hand
, music and arts, whilst they are important to help keep a past existence alive when compared to
science
and
technology
, will always have to take a back seat.
However
, we must understand, that
this
doesn't mean that we should completely avoid the arts, as it helps tourism for a country, which help boost a country's economy.
For example
, in Trivandrum, the capital of Kerala various artists are requested to paint murals all over the city, to beautify the city centre. An art exhibition is held every in Cochin, to promote the local artists.
This
exhibition attracts many foreign tourists which help boost the economy. In conclusion, whilst I feel both sectors are important, the
science
and
technology
sector edges the arts in the fact that it is more involved around the general health of the population.
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