In spite of technological developments in transportation, many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach in any destination. what are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?
Technology has been increasing rapidly to make
humans
life more Replace the word
human
comforatble
and relaxed. Countless folks say that a Correct your spelling
comfortable
bicycle
is a good way of transportation and can be reached easily any place. Save the environment and being healthy is the advantagestages
, takes long travel Correct your spelling
advantage stages
time
and may
Correct your spelling
maybe
be occur
accident is the disadvantages. Change the verb form
occur
This
essay discusses both benefits and drawbacks of this
trend for the following reasons.
There are some benefits of using Add an article
a bicycle
the bicycle
bicycle
for daily uses, Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
firstly
, this
can reduce the Noise, Air pollution, releasing the fossil fuels and harmful carbohydrate in order to
you can be saved the environment from global warming. Correct your spelling
so
Secondly
, using bicycle
is a good exercise for humans because nowadays most people are Add an article
a bicycle
suffered
Wrong verb form
suffering
for
Change preposition
from
over weight
and cardiovascular problems, Correct your spelling
overweight
hence
this
method of transportation could be avoided from these kinds of diseases. For example
, enormous
gym has Correct article usage
an enormous
bicycle
type of exercise machine, Correct article usage
a bicycle
consequently
, gym user
is being fit, frequently using Fix the agreement mistake
users
this
vehicle can be given more advantages to humans.
Conversely
, there are some drawbacks of using this
kind of transportation, first
, this
takes a long travel time
than any other motor cars because bicycle
cannot overcome any motor vans which speed, Add an article
a bicycle
as a
result
people cannot reach to their desire destination in on Add the comma(s)
,result
time
. Second
, Add an article
the accident
an accident
accident
might be happened due to poor light by other cars because there is no separate lane for Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
bicycle
riders yet. For instance
, National
Correct article usage
the National
high way
road is not suitable for Correct your spelling
highway
bicycle
riders due to only heavy and speed vans are
allowed so Wrong verb form
being
bicycle
could not ride on all Fix the agreement mistake
bicycles
road
.
To conclude, technology is improved day-by-day and the public can get more benefits from Fix the agreement mistake
roads
this
, even though bicycle
ride is quite popular ans
some Correct your spelling
and
person
is suggested. Save the atmosphere, being healthy, these are the advantages of using Fix the agreement mistake
people
bicycle
and it takes a long travel Add an article
a bicycle
the bicycle
time
, accident
may Add an article
an accident
the accident
be happened
is the drawbacks too. In my opinion, about Change to the active voice
happen
have happened
this
, the population should be used bicycle
for their everyday purpose, thus
we would be protected the atmosphere from any adverse effect.Submitted by reanudeepan on
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