In spite of technological developments in transportation, many people believe that a bicycle is the best way to reach in any destination. what are the advantages and disadvantages of using a bicycle nowadays?

Technology has been increasing rapidly to make
humans
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life more
comforatble
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comfortable
and relaxed. Countless folks say that a
bicycle
is a good way of transportation and can be reached easily any place. Save the environment and being healthy is the
advantagestages
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advantage stages
, takes long travel
time
and
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be occur
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accident is the disadvantages.
This
essay discusses both benefits and drawbacks of
this
trend for the following reasons. There are some benefits of using
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a bicycle
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bicycle
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for daily uses,
firstly
,
this
can reduce the Noise, Air pollution, releasing the fossil fuels and harmful carbohydrate in order
to
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you can be saved the environment from global warming.
Secondly
, using
bicycle
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is a good exercise for humans because nowadays most people are
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for
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over weight
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and cardiovascular problems,
hence
this
method of transportation could be avoided from these kinds of diseases.
For example
,
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gym has
bicycle
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a bicycle
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type of exercise machine,
consequently
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user
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users
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is being fit, frequently using
this
vehicle can be given more advantages to humans.
Conversely
, there are some drawbacks of using
this
kind of transportation,
first
,
this
takes a long travel
time
than any other motor cars because
bicycle
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cannot overcome any motor vans which speed,
as a
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people cannot reach to their desire destination in on
time
.
Second
,
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the accident
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accident
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might be happened due to poor light by other cars because there is no separate lane for
bicycle
riders yet.
For instance
,
National
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high way
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road is not suitable for
bicycle
riders due to only heavy and speed vans
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allowed so
bicycle
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bicycles
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could not ride on all
road
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roads
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. To conclude, technology is improved day-by-day and the public can get more benefits from
this
, even though
bicycle
ride is quite popular
ans
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and
some
person
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people
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is suggested. Save the atmosphere, being healthy, these are the advantages of using
bicycle
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a bicycle
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and it takes a long travel
time
,
accident
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may
be happened
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is the drawbacks too. In my opinion, about
this
, the population should be used
bicycle
for their everyday purpose,
thus
we would be protected the atmosphere from any adverse effect.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • eco-friendly
  • cardiovascular fitness
  • urban pollution
  • congestion
  • cycling infrastructure
  • weather dependency
  • vulnerable
  • initial purchase
  • ongoing maintenance
  • secure storage
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