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Some universities now offer their courses on the Internet so that people can study online. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this?

#universities #offer #courses #internet #people #study
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It has been over a thousand years since the
first
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 university in the world has been built, and some cultures have been left in the present day. The best case is
students
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 need to
study
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 only in the
class
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.
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,
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 example
also
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 has been adjusted over time.
For instance
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, some universities have changed some courses from in-
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 to online for their
student
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 to
study
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 anywhere or even anytime. The following paragraph will be discussing the advantages and disadvantages of
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 change.
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, the conclusion has been reached. On the one hand, for disadvantages,
Firstly
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, I believe that
student
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’s motivation while studying from the online
course
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 will lower than
study
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 in
class
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 because of many factors,
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 as the atmosphere between the
classroom
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 and their room, usually in the
classroom
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, the atmosphere in the
classroom
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 seems to perfect for the
student
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 to
study
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 more than their room.
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, the interaction between
students
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 and their teachers, usually for the online
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,
students
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 cannot interact with the
teacher
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 like when they
study
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 in
class
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.
For example
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, some
students
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 like to ask their
teacher
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 about curious things in a topic, while studying online if these
students
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 want to ask something from the
teacher
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, it will make some
students
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 waste of time listening to the
teacher
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.
On the other hand
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, an online
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also
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 provides advantages for their
student
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. Perhaps the best example is since they do not require to
study
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 in the
classroom
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, they can have more free time because they just wake up and sit in front of their laptop and join an app for the online
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, and the other advantages from the online
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, which is they can record the
class
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 for later if they need to review their topics. In summary, I believe that some universities that offer an online
course
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 might just want their
student
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 to have an easy life and not be too stressed about their
study
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.
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    • Sentence 2 - Example
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    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
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