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in many countries today, crime novels and TV crimes drams are becoming more and more popular. Why do you think these books and TV show are popular? What is your opinion of crime fiction and TV crime dramas?

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Nowadays,
Crime
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 Books and
TV
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 shows are gaining the attention of
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 and becoming very famous in some countries and the reason behind
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 is personal interest and
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 think that it could be entertainment. In
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, there are lots of reasons behind the popularity of these
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 of novels and
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 dramas. From the
last
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 two or three decades,
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-related
movies
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 rising and it becomes more famous in human and I believe that it is the main reason.
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, one survey in the USA shows that a number of audiences prefer to watch
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movies
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instead
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 of romantic and comedies.
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, some criminal storybooks are surprising ending ones so
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 are excited to read that type of book.
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, I think that both
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 fiction and
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 drama can give new experiences to humans. There are some drawbacks of these
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 of
crime
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 series as well. Parents are not allowed their children to watch these
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 of
movies
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 as they believe that children are quick learners during childhood so they follow what they read or watch.
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, plenty of criminals copy the
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 from
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 shows. For illustrate, In India, most criminals follow the
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 from the
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 show
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 petrol. In conclusion, Both
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 novels and
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 contain bad stories
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 as rape, murder, and many more so it could make the audience excited but it would be a not good message for a generation. As result, it could be a rise criminal in real life. I personally believe that
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 should have to aware of these
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 of books as well as
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