In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?
Over the
last
two decades, teenagers have been roaming to
around Change preposition
apply
in
Change preposition
apply
the
outside alone especially at Correct article usage
apply
night
due to
many reasons. Recently, Change preposition
for
in
the United Change preposition
apply
states
government has imposed Change the capitalization
States
a new rules
for teens which is they never go outside without a guardian in the dark. I strongly agree with Correct the article-noun agreement
new rules
a new rule
this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, the crimes rate are increased day-by-day especially night
time, if the youngsters go outside at Change preposition
at night
night
without their parents, they might be attacked by a thief because criminals are mostly roaming in the dark and this
is the best time for theirs. Taking India for example
, more than 50% of the crime is happened
at Change to the active voice
happens
happened
night
especially teenagers are mostly suffered
like rape, murder and etc. Wrong verb form
suffer
Therefore
, the adults never go out of doors without parents is the best and foremost idea for protect
the youngsters.
Change the verb form
protecting
Moreover
, the US nation has more dangerous wildlife, its
Change the pronoun
it
oftenly
comes to walk on the road and residential place due to searching food. While teens are being out of doors Correct your spelling
often
its
can Correct pronoun usage
it
esily
attack to them especially children. Correct your spelling
easily
For instance
, Leopords
and bears frequently visit Correct your spelling
Leopards
to
Remove the preposition
apply
residential
Add an article
the residential
a residential
place
, walk on the road, Fix the agreement mistake
places
thus
, countless people are affected by this
threaten
issue. Change the form of the verb
threatening
Hence
, the Us government has implemented a safe and best policy for adult
.
To conclude, the United States ministry always tries to protect their young person from crime and wildlife because both these are very dangerous so they have imposed a curfew for a young person should not be Fix the agreement mistake
adults
gone
outside without mother and father. Wrong verb form
go
Hence
, I strongly agree with this
statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope this
policy should be implemented to
all over the world in order to we could be protected our teenagers.Change preposition
apply
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