In some areas of the US, a 'curfew' is imposed, in which teenagers are not allowed to be out of doors after a particular time at night unless they are accompanied by an adult. What is your opinion about this?

Over the
last
two decades, teenagers have been roaming
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around
in
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the
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outside alone especially at
night
due
to
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many reasons. Recently,
in
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the United
states
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government has imposed
a new rules
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for teens which is they never go outside without a guardian in the dark. I strongly agree with
this
statement for the following reasons.
To begin
with, the crimes rate are increased day-by-day especially
night
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time, if the youngsters go outside at
night
without their parents, they might be attacked by a thief because criminals are mostly roaming in the dark and
this
is the best time for theirs. Taking India
for example
, more than 50% of the crime
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at
night
especially teenagers are mostly
suffered
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like rape, murder and etc.
Therefore
, the adults never go out of doors without parents is the best and foremost idea for
protect
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the youngsters.
Moreover
, the US nation has more dangerous wildlife,
its
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oftenly
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often
comes to walk on the road and residential place due to searching food. While teens are being out of doors
its
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can
esily
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easily
attack to them especially children.
For instance
,
Leopords
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Leopards
and bears frequently visit
to
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residential
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place
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, walk on the road,
thus
, countless people are affected by
this
threaten
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issue.
Hence
, the Us government has implemented a safe and best policy for
adult
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. To conclude, the United States ministry always tries to protect their young person from crime and wildlife because both these are very dangerous so they have imposed a curfew for a young person should not be
gone
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outside without mother and father.
Hence
, I strongly agree with
this
statement in the above-mentioned details. I hope
this
policy should be implemented
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all over the world in order to we could be protected our teenagers.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enforce
  • juvenile
  • repercussions
  • autonomy
  • adolescence
  • paternalistic
  • delinquency
  • municipality
  • ordinance
  • authoritarian
  • peer pressure
  • social dynamics
  • civil liberties
  • community policing
  • preventative measures
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