Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?

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are the basis of most modern-day societies. Some
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believe that
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could not function if
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were free to do as they please. I partly agree with
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and will discuss the issue in the following essay. Many
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fear that
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would deteriorate into chaos if there were no
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or
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in place to control
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’s behaviour. They believe that
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exist in order to set boundaries so that
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behave in a way
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conducive to a peaceful and functioning
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. I believe
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is true to a certain extent.
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, if there were no
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or
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no police to enforce those
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a certain number of
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may try to take advantage of
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a situation and some upheaval may result as a consequence.
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would only be temporary, as I believe that the majority of human beings are good
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and would ultimately unite against those who were causing distress to the rest of
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, once again resulting in a peaceful state.
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, I do believe that the amount of
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that
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are subjected to in most modern-day societies causes more harm than good. Most
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and
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these days benefit a minority of
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, while the majority are still being affected by the very
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that are there to protect them.
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, in many
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it is illegal to own a gun.
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, when a criminal breaks into their home and attempts to murder them with a dangerous weapon, they are unable to defend themselves effectively.
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, many
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these days favour the rich and oppose the poor.
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why in most countries the gap between the rich and poor is getting bigger and bigger. In conclusion, I believe there only needs to be one universal law, “Do no harm to others”. The innate goodwill and intelligence of human beings will naturally create the most peaceful and productive human societies possible, without the endless amounts of unnecessary
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and
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of today.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social order
  • harmonious
  • individual freedoms
  • societal norms
  • unrestricted freedom
  • crime rates
  • dysfunctional
  • fair distribution
  • human rights
  • justice system
  • accountability
  • enforcing laws
  • restrictive regulations
  • societal functionality
  • legal frameworks
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