One of the major problems that faces today’s governments is creating enough satisfactory housing for their increasing populations whilst (=while) still trying to protect the environment. Discuss this statement and give your opinion.

With the high density of population in recent decades, increasing accommodation becomes one of the pressing and critical targets for the officials. Meanwhile,

however

, protecting the earth from destruction and deforestation is

also

a significant issue. Raising the building heights forms the most straightforward and effective alternative. City skyline

drawn

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by skyscrapers to satisfy the enlarging demand of living spaces, whereas protective approaches of

land

overly development and logging are inevitable. Minimizing construction field and mitigation of destruction,

therefore

, in terms of higher building, effectively overcoming

this

obstacle. The resolution still has its demerit though, while increasing height

also

means that citizens have difficulty

to receive

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sunlight and

survive

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in crowded spaces.

Land

reclamation,

in addition

, would be

substitutable

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matter for dealing with the problems mentioned above. Yet,

although

averting from

destroy

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of

land

, filling

land

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the land

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and the production of waste

similarly

have

great

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impact on sea creatures and their habitats. An efficient uplift of housing prices,

on the other hand

, is supposed to be another way to confine

limitation

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dwellings for

dense

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the dense

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population

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.

However

, with regard to

uneven

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distribution of wealth for the society, unequal living standards and qualities are aggravated via

this

solution.

Hence

, it would not be a reasonable manner for reversing the awful situation. From my own perspective, coming up with

solution

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for not only

alleviate

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damage

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the damage

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of lands and plants but

also

expansion

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the expansion

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of surviving spaces is

dilemma

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a dilemma

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. The authorities consider

for

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heightening building,

however

, civilians’ living demand is

also

a primary concern to meet with. Any solution should be existed for causing the fewest problems.