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Some people say that the only reason for learning a foreign language is in order to travel to or work in a foreign country. Others say that these are not the only reasons why someone should learn a foreign language. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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People
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 have different views about whether going abroad is the only reason for studying a foreign
language
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.
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 I understand why some
people
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 want to master a new
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 only when they need to travel or work overseas, I believe that there are some needs to do that even when
people
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 stay domestic. There are several reasons why
people
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 are not motivated to learn a foreign
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 if they are not going to be in a foreign country. Staying in one’s own country,
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, means that everything in daily life is in his mother tongue and almost everyone speaks his mother tongue. There won’t be any inconvenience if someone can’t speak any foreign languages in most cases.
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, it normally takes a long time to master a foreign
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 for most
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, and the time would be wasted if they barely have a chance to use the
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, it is important for
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 to learn a foreign
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 in some domestic cases.
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, a foreign
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 may be the key to better career prospects, as some jobs in international companies require staff to use another
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 to communicate with clients or superiors.
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,
people
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 can appreciate foreign culture more thoroughly when they understand the
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, many thousands of young
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 start to learn Japanese and Korean driven by their interests in Japanese animation and K-pop. It can
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 be argued that
people
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 may want to learn a foreign
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 out of interest or for realistic reasons, even when they are not going overseas. In conclusion, it is reasonable for many
people
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 to think they should master a new
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 only if they are going to travel or work overseas, but it seems to me that there are solid reasons to do so when they stay in their own country.
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Topic Vocabulary:
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  • linguistic proficiency
  • globalized world
  • cross-cultural communication
  • immersive experience
  • adaptability
  • cultural exchange
  • interpersonal skills
  • employment prospects
  • empathy
  • intellectual development
  • overcome language barriers
  • global market
  • resourceful
  • life-changing
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