Schools are no longer necessary because children can get so much information available through the internet, and they can study just as well at home. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

These days, with the development of technology, people easily access
information
on the
Internet
, including education.
This
development has caused controversy as some have argued that children no longer need schooling but should
instead
study online at
home
. In my opinion, I largely disagree with
such
a view. It is true that pupils can self-study at
home
with the help of digital devices thanks to
its
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rich amount of
information
. We can easily find the answers
about
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all academic problems in all subjects
such
as Math, physics.
In particular
, during the raging Covid-19 epidemic, all learning must be done at
home
. It is impossible not to acknowledge the
useful
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of the
Internet
with materials extracted from many sources.
However
, a plethora of
information
can make pupils come across unofficial
one
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and feel confused because they don’t know which source to trust.
For example
, there are many websites that take advantage of the trust of
information
seekers to misrepresent reactionaries.
On the other hand
, schools provide many life skills
besides
academic subjects
such
as communication
skill
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, social
skill
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and teamwork skills which cannot be figured out at
home
.
Although
the appearances of many social media sites provide a place to contact online between pupils and teachers like Zoom, Google Meet or Microsoft Teams, the role of school cannot be replaced. The more using
internet
as
priority
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for
study
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will
also
lead to the serious cause, since, its influence the low of the health condition of the teenagers. Some students could suffer from the irritation of their eyes. In conclusion, even though some students prefer to use the
internet
for the available
information
, yet it cannot be totally trusted to depend on. Schools
always
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are always
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the better choice for every
students
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student
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to get
information
exactly and fully.
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