People in community now could buy cheaper consumer goods. Do the advantages outweigh the disadvantages?

In
this
modern era, products
price
are increasing
day-by-day
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due to
lack
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a lack
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of
resorces
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resources
. People nowadays buy
goods
in
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a
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ecomical
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economical
comical
price
to
arround
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around
the world,
this
is
a
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good for all consumers.
This
trend has more benefits than drawbacks,
this
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essay discusses briefly for the following reasons. There are many advantages of buying low-cost products, one of the main benefits is
this
can stimulate more competition between
manufactures
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manufacturers
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in order to avoid monopoly
seller
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sellers
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. Another advantage is people can easily buy a product with their minimum budget because today many folks suffer
to
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unemployment and if a consumer
stuff
cost is high, they would not be bought
a
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stuff
.
For example
, Redmi phones
price
are
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very low than any other company
brand
,
hence
, countless Indians are using
this mobiles
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.
Moreover
, these kinds of low-cost
goods
can give more positives to the consumers and
this
can stimulate to buy more things in order to sales ratio will be increased. There are some drawbacks of buying cheaper consumer
goods
, One of the main disadvantages is lack of
quality
, the producers make
a
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stuff
with
third
rate
quality
material because if they using
a
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best
quality
, they would
neve
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never
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give low-
price
things,
therefore
they reduce the
quality
as well as reduce the
price
too. Another disadvantage is
this
kind of low-
price
goods
can affect the top companies
brand
due to that things amount is very high,
as a result
, folks might be
bought
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cheaper amount of
stuff
.
For example
, countless people are using
minimum
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the minimum
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amount of Android mobiles which is China phones, these kinds
of
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mobiles have the same features
like
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as
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top
brand
phones like Samsung, Apple and etc. Obviously,
this
process can affect negatively. To conclude,
this
process has both positives as well as negatives. Avoid the monopoly seller and easily
affortable
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affordable
is the
advantages
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advantage
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of
this
trend. Lack of
quality
and will affect the top
brand
products is the disadvantages. I think
this
trend has more benefits outweigh the drawbacks. I hope
this
process is conducive to the
next
generation.
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