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nowadays, many people cannot read or write. What problems does this cause? What measures can governments take to solve these problems?

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These days, that are a lot of people don’t get a good chance for education, and there are many reasons for that.
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 as, that are a huge number of poor societies and don’t have any aid from the government or local communities. In
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various dilemma
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 caused by a lack of information.
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, the rising poverty rate in some of the communities is leading to communities in
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, parents in
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 informal settlement send their children to work when there is younger because to earn money.
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, it will affect these kids when will grow up not to care about completing their studies.
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, the absence of many local organizations there are can help their humans and spread awareness between people and arguments many events to lead parents for reading and writing. These problems,
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, can be solved.
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, the government can spend more money and support for the provided free education to all ages especially, their child who belong to low-income families.
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, there are can make data and register for all families in their poor settlement and send voluntary to learn they are and take them to schools,
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, can give them some lessons in the curriculum to make a handicraft
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 can make some events to sell these things and earning money to their families.
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, encourage their parents to send them to learn a lot of things useful in their life.
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, many of the local community can go through their societies and talk with people for important learn and
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 it there does not take a good education and will be the effect on their future. In conclusion, there are many types for
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 as rising flags from the government to their community and enforcing them to learn and ensuring that their kids take a lot of learning and encouraging them to learn by training and workshops, I think it will get solved.

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