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some people believe that we cannot learn anything from the past for our own life today, while others believe that history is a valuable source of information to understand human's life. discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Do you think previous experience had tough you a lot of it was a nightmare for you? Some of them believe that few folks are not learning anything about the past and fewer of them are applying and having a great experience in future. To being with,I will illustrate to the people who are against that having a previous affair in their lives was tough nothing.Due to repeating what they have done.And having a bad experience in
life
 few of them are not believing that they can apply in future.
For example
,being teenagers they have an eagerness to do
such
 things that they think it was cool and make their
life
 suffer.
However
,
on the other hand
,they appreciate and learned a lot from what happened in the past.Mostly, the bad thing was a great example of
this
.
For example
,nowadays we notice that few of the teenagers exploring
the
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as a result
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as a
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 they having pregnant at a young age due to curiosity.And it was a good sample for the other teenagers they will be scared and
learned
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 that it cannot happen to them. Despite
this
,half of them learned a lot and applied it in future so that it will never happen again.And before doing
such
 curiosity things we need to ask a piece of advice or deeper thinking to decide.So that we cannot waste our lives and enjoy the teenager's
life
.And as a ,
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 they have more success in their lives and understand the value of
life
.
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