Countries should produce the food that their population eats, and import as little as possible. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons, examples to your answer.
It is commonly believed that these days all needed products for their citizens should be strictly produced within every government. I strongly disagree with
this
statement as some sorts of meals are impossible to be made or found without bringing from non-domestic
Add an article
the non-domestic
a non-domestic
commodity
.
Fix the agreement mistake
commodities
To begin
with, it is well known that each crop requires a suitable climate and soil for their
gradual growth due to do different geographical locations. Correct pronoun usage
its
Therefore
, it is impossible to every type of food
in one country and some products are simply inaccessible, while in other areas they are laying under the feet. For instance
, seafood, which is a
main and cheapest product for every individual, Correct article usage
the
only
provided in coastal cities, whereas in Kazakhstan, where a person can hardly reach the closest shore, Add a missing verb
is only
this
type of meal is a true treasure. Thus
, it is the most effective solution in economic
aspect to import Correct article usage
the economic
food
for some countries.
Secondly
, if any country is losing economically from the regular purchasing crops, the best way to compensate is to export other types of food
, instead
of cutting meal imports and leave
human Wrong verb form
leaving
being
without nutritional Fix the agreement mistake
beings
food
ingredients, destroying balanced diet and adversely influencing well-being each of them. For example
, Kazakhstan that is
illustrious for its corns
and meat can export these types of meals Fix the agreement mistake
corn
to
Replace the word
too
far away
countries like Japan and import seafood from them. Correct your spelling
faraway
Therefore
, it is crucially important to export abundant products rather than indecisively waste it
and import needed crops than Correct pronoun usage
them
suffering
from Wrong verb form
suffer
its
deficits.
To conclude, even though it is quite complicated and demands expenditure to get some supply from other countries, but it is absolutely better for economic stability and management of any kind of resources.Correct pronoun usage
their
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