Space exploration costs taxpayers an exorbitant amount of money each year. What are the advantages and disadvantage of spending money on space exploration?

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A lot of the government's spending is on the NASA program to look for alternate planets to see whether they will support

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is more of a divided opinion and poses its own set of advantages and disadvantages, which I shall substantiate my reasons in

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essay. On one hand, the current global warming rates have reached a limit where, it is now of utmost importance to find another planet, which can sustain

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as per the atmospheric

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of the

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, a recent study shows Mars is the most like to like

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planet, in terms of the

earth

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's atmospheric

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, which can sustain

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, the identification of a river system on Mars has laid claim to the fact that Mars in a way is more similar to

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as compared to any of the other planets. Alternately, the public feels that with the amount being spent on the space program to find

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on other planets, that money could be spent on providing better healthcare to its citizens, trying to eradicate poverty,

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the educational and infrastructural systems, and most important to stop unemployment amongst the middle-class citizens.

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, the spending budget of NASA on average runs into the billions, which is used for other purposes,

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drastically improve the living

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of the people. In conclusion, I feel it is very important for the government to be spending on their science program, because

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the increase in global warming on

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, the

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are slowly becoming inhabitable and

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it is necessary to find an alternate planet which would be able to support

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, for the continuation of the human race.

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Ensure all points directly relate to the advantages and disadvantages of spending money on space exploration. Providing more specific examples would enhance the response.

coherence and cohesion

The essay has a clear structure with an introduction, body paragraphs discussing advantages and disadvantages, and a conclusion. Improve coherence by ensuring smoother transitions between ideas.

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The essay effectively presents arguments on both sides of the issue of spending money on space exploration.

coherence and cohesion

The introduction and conclusion are well-developed and effectively summarize the main points of the essay.

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Sentence 3 - Thesis
Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph

Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
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Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph

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Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 6.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

280 words

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