Humans are basically selfish. Write a paragraph about 300 words to state that whether you agree or disagree with the statement. Include examples and illustrations to support your viewpoint.

People tend to be
selfcentered
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self-centred
self centered
.
This
is a general opinion
which
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that
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can be adopted by many differently depending on how they perceive others.
Personaly
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Personally
Personal
,
i
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I
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will discuss
in
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this in
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opposition
oposition
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of
this
statement.
To begin
with,
the
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bigger percentage of the population is guided by
religeous
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religious
values that support peace, love and harmony in
the
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apply
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society.We all belong to a social group
which
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that
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has clear norms to ensure
peaciful
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peaceful
co-existence among its folk.Selfishness is a
devinder
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defender
of the community and all
cogregations
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congregations
despise those people who
posess
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possess
such
a
charactor
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character
or even rebuke them in an attempt to correct
the
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them.
For example
,a group leader who always
consinder
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consider
considered
himself
first
when opportunities
comes
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come
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,
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will soon be rejected by the members.
However
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he can be demoted or expelled.
This
will seclude him from interacting with other people
hence
make
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making
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him live in isolation.
Therefore
,individuals
upholds
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uphold
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generosity,care and compassion towards each other for the fear of being treated badly by others.
Secondly
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egocentrism is a personality deviation
which
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that
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is assumed by a small group of persons who
for
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form
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a
reason
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reasonably
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experienced harsh interaction with their environment.During childhood when we are assuming the learned behaviours which later translate to personal traits and
charactors
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characters
,the
sorrounding
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surrounding
surroundings
and
its
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their
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impact on our early life
plays
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play
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a big role
on
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in
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what we shall be like when we grow up.For,instance,those children who grow in a big poor family where all resources are not enough will develop
fixation
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a fixation
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whereby they will always seek satisfaction
first
before sharing because they think that they may not get another chance like that again.
This
aspect will later mature to selfishness if not tamed
promptyl
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promptly
. In conclusion,being selfish is an evil practice and should be avoided at all
cost
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costs
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.Those who practice it should be admonished to repent and adopt healthy interpersonal relationships.
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