Some people believe that too many resources and attention are devoted to the protection of wild animals and birds. To what extend do you agree or disagree

It is widely known that the amount of wild

animals

has considerably decreased within a few decades mostly due to

the

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humans

' actions and natural disasters.

Therefore

, some individuals devote a lot of

efforts

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in order to prevent

wildlives

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wildfires

from extinction, while others consider that these efforts are too exceeding. In my opinion, I completely disagree that there are over-abundant endeavours as well as I will expand why I think like

this

in the essay below.

To begin

with, most people do not realize that these

animals

and birds generate benefits not only to

humans

but

also

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whole world. In fact, the existence of

animals

can maintain the balance of

ecosystem

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and indirectly compensate the terrible

humans

' behaviours,

for instance

, the intruding of

humans

into the forests whether commercial or agricultural purposes, by providing the imperative

nutritients

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nutrients

to soil and plants which have an important role in the forest. The disturbance is able to

anihilate

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annihilate

habitats and food of creatures in the wood,

as a result

, the

quantity

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of their species will decrease and

finally

can be extinct.

In addition

to the above reason, there is another cause why dedicating to

help

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wildlives

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wildlife

and birds are appropriate which is our connection with them because since ancient period wild

animals

has granted human both food resources and workforces.

Moreover

, most issues

wildlives

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wildfires

have to encounter these days are from men's actions,

hence

,

humans

should be

ressponsible

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responsible

for their

conducts

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which harmfully affect other livings. In

conculsion

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conclusion

, I insist that defending wild

animals

and other kinds of them is necessary since these livings play a vital role in the healthy ecosystem and

humankinds

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humankind

.

Thus

, until

animals

are absolutely secure from various threats , the effort dedicating in order to

make

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animals

safe is still to carry on.