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Although you have never formally studied computing, you have always been interested in computers. You have just read about a computer course that really interests you, but it is only for people who have completed an elementary course. Write a letter to the college enrolment officer. In your letter explain why you are writing describe your circumstances ask if a special exception can be made for you so you can enrol in the course You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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Dear Enrolment Officer, I am writing
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 email to express my interest in enrolling
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 the computer
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 that was published in the local newspaper
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 week. I would like to know more about the requirements for individuals who wish to register for the
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 without the prerequisite
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. I finished my
undergraduation
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undergraduate
 in
fine-arts
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last
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 year. Despite having no formal education in any of the computer courses, I have learnt
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 many things about computers one could learn by oneself with limited resources. I have not studied the
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 required to take up
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 computer
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.
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, I gathered all the knowledge of the elementary
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 on my own time. I was wondering if there are any special considerations for people
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who possess the knowledge but have not done the formal learning of the prerequisite. Could you please the possibilities for registering for
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course
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 given my situation? Thank you for taking the time and looking forward to hearing from you. Best regards, Sharath.
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