You are in the local rugby team. You recently heard that a player in your team is in the hospital. Write a letter to your teammate. In your letter, say how you feel about the news ask about the treatment in the hospital suggest some ways of cheering him/her up

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Dear Ryan, I hope you are getting better , I heard the news you met with a tragic accident I was shattered when I got to know that you were admitted to the hospital because of leg and arm facture , as a captain of our rugby team it

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for months and not able to play.

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, I can feel how much you going through with all the treatments , are you feeling better with all medications and the services of the hospital is the staff behaving and cooperating well when you going through immense pain?

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, I know you have a very Strong personality and you will do great to come back to our team as we always show sportsmanship

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I pray to god as well that you will be fit and fine soon and join our next summer tournament. I wish you a speedy recovery , my friend. With warm regards, Shivani.

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coherence and cohesion

Try to structure your letter more clearly by separating your feelings, questions, and suggestions into distinct paragraphs.

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Make sure to check for any grammatical errors, such as subject-verb agreement and word forms (e.g., 'fracture' instead of 'facture').

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Your heartfelt concern for Ryan comes through strongly, which is very positive.

suitable writing tone

You used a friendly tone appropriate for communication with a teammate.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

163 words

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