Using a computer every day can have more negative than positive effects on your children. Do you agree or disagree?
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computers
too much can lead to negative Use synonyms
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more than having positive Use synonyms
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on your children. To me, I partly agree with Use synonyms
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, we are gonna talk about the negative Use synonyms
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of using Use synonyms
computers
too much. The Use synonyms
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thing people always come up with would be negative Use synonyms
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on children’s eyes, to be honest, I don’t like Use synonyms
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reason but I agree with it, staring at a screen or something will make your eyes work harder to concentrate on one thing and can be tired easily having blindness or unhealthy Linking Words
effects
on your eyes in the future. There are many more reasons that the Use synonyms
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or the so-called “scientists” said, those are playing Use synonyms
computers
too much makes you not know the real world or the fake world, making them crazy or have murderous intense as I said above.
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, before giving a conclusion, let’s talk about the positive Linking Words
effects
. I know that there are not many positive Use synonyms
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but some of them are good and need to be discussed in a conversation between a professional and a child. Use synonyms
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, we can talk about a situation, if your kid is playing Use synonyms
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games too much Use synonyms
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you need to check if they are being bullied at school are having problems making real Linking Words
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. Kids always find another solution to make Use synonyms
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which are making Use synonyms
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on the Use synonyms
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or they are being bullied too much leading to the final solutions, Use synonyms
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may sound like a negative effect at Linking Words
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is the best way to make Use synonyms
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. The other positive would be for studying, using Use synonyms
computers
every day are not likely to be like playing or doing things that are not good on the Use synonyms
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, but Use synonyms
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using them for studying. Linking Words
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is a good method of self-studying and anyone can use it.
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computers
every day give a lot of negative Use synonyms
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than the actual positive Use synonyms
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but it is enough to make my opinions, I think using Correct your spelling
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computers
to make Use synonyms
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and study is the best way of using a computer, but you must remember not to use it too much or else you will have unhealthy addict as well as negative Use synonyms
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toward your body. So make sure to control your day and take your time studying or anything else like playing sports. That’s all, thank you for reading Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite