Some people think that the news channels and media nowadays have sensationalized and influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that is also positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
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believe
belive
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believe
negative
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a negative
in
human life.Others think that it has Change preposition
on
positive
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a positive
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on
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we can discuss both views and give my own opinion.
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media
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news
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internet
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the intrenet
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first
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media
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deprive
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losing
loosing
our vital social skills Correct your spelling
losing
such
as communication, empathy, Linking Words
sympothy
, emotional understanding.Correct your spelling
sympathy
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channels
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lead
to focusing on Change the verb form
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the
sensational and viral Correct article usage
apply
news
to attract more viewers.Use synonyms
Hence
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.They become greedy corporators and concentrate only on profit despite the thought of Use synonyms
media
is considered as the fourth pillar of our constitution. Use synonyms
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pocso
case for weeks , but the court had acquitted him following the negative result of DNA . Correct your spelling
photo
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society
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could not
ready
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be ready
finally
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but not least, sometimes Linking Words
channels
have Use synonyms
act
as a Change the verb form
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media
of spreading Use synonyms
rumerous
of Correct your spelling
numerous
celeberaties
and politicians without looking the truth side.
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celebrities
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, Linking Words
media
has Use synonyms
lot
of advantages in our Change the article
a lot
society
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such
as Linking Words
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societies
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media
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news
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channels
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considering
as the fourth pillar of our Wrong verb form
considered
consitution
. Correct your spelling
constitution
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, it helps to bring out corruption and Linking Words
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face of authorities . I Correct article usage
the real
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believe
belive
, only the cause of Correct your spelling
believe
media
existence Use synonyms
the
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is the
politicens
and our government working properly .Correct your spelling
politicians
politics
Additionally
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news
and increase knowledge from our comfortable place ,it leads Use synonyms
adapt
new avenues for our success.The significant fact is that Correct your spelling
adopt
,
it helps our weaker Remove the comma
apply
society
and shows their difficulties what are they suffer from authorities and power class of communities.
To conclude, Use synonyms
eventhough
, it has Correct your spelling
even though
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in our Add an article
an advantage
the advantage
society
, Use synonyms
media
are working as Use synonyms
profit making
companies.Add a hyphen
profit-making
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.Use synonyms
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