Some people think that the news channels and media nowadays have sensationalized and influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that is also positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
Media
and televisional
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television
channels
have important
role in our Add an article
an important
society
.Hence
, some group
of people Fix the agreement mistake
groups
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believe
belive
it has Correct your spelling
believe
negative
impact Add an article
a negative
in
human life.Others think that it has Change preposition
on
positive
influence Add an article
a positive
in
our Change preposition
on
society
.In this
essay
we can discuss both views and give my own opinion.
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To begin
with, technological advancement can be seen in
everywhere ,especially in Change preposition
apply
media
and news
channels
which can share news
directly to people through Correct your spelling
internet
intrenet
.These Correct article usage
the intrenet
channels
have adversely influenced human life ,first
and foremost, we are addicting
to Replace the word
addicted
media
so it deprive
us Change the verb form
deprives
from
social interaction. Change the preposition
of
As a result
, we are Correct your spelling
losing
loosing
our vital social skills Correct your spelling
losing
such
as communication, empathy, sympothy
, emotional understanding.Correct your spelling
sympathy
Secondly
, the competition between channels
lead
to focusing on Change the verb form
leads
the
sensational and viral Correct article usage
apply
news
to attract more viewers.Hence
they are avoiding or neglecting the moral values and commitment to society
.They become greedy corporators and concentrate only on profit despite the thought of media
is considered as the fourth pillar of our constitution. For example
, recently the media
had celebrated a pocso
case for weeks , but the court had acquitted him following the negative result of DNA . Correct your spelling
photo
Eventhough
, he Correct your spelling
Even though
released
from prison, due to the Add a missing verb
was released
media
impact society
couldnot
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could not
ready
to accept him and Add a missing verb
be ready
finally
he committed suicide.Last
but not least, sometimes channels
have act
as a Change the verb form
acted
media
of spreading rumerous
of Correct your spelling
numerous
celeberaties
and politicians without looking the truth side.
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celebrities
However
, media
has lot
of advantages in our Change the article
a lot
society
such
as enable
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enabling
society
to think progressively ,help
weaker Wrong verb form
helping
society
to bring forth and make to come out the real face of our Fix the agreement mistake
societies
society
.To be precise, media
and news
channels
are considering
as the fourth pillar of our Wrong verb form
considered
consitution
. Correct your spelling
constitution
Hence
, it helps to bring out corruption and real
face of authorities . I Correct article usage
the real
Correct your spelling
believe
belive
, only the cause of Correct your spelling
believe
media
existence the
Add a missing verb
is the
politicens
and our government working properly .Correct your spelling
politicians
politics
Additionally
,it helps us to know the world news
and increase knowledge from our comfortable place ,it leads adapt
new avenues for our success.The significant fact is that Correct your spelling
adopt
,
it helps our weaker Remove the comma
apply
society
and shows their difficulties what are they suffer from authorities and power class of communities.
To conclude, eventhough
, it has Correct your spelling
even though
advantage
in our Add an article
an advantage
the advantage
society
, media
are working as profit making
companies.Add a hyphen
profit-making
Therefore
, they are focusing on the
viral matters to attract more viewers despite moral values and real Correct article usage
apply
news
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