Some people think that the news channels and media nowadays have sensationalized and influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that is also positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answers and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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channels

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role in our

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, some

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of people

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it has

negative

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a negative

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impact

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on

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human life.Others think that it has

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a positive

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influence

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on

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our

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we can discuss both views and give my own opinion.

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with, technological advancement can be seen

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everywhere ,especially in

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and

news

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channels

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which can share

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directly to people through

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internet

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.These

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have adversely influenced human life ,

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and foremost, we are

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to

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so it

deprive

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us

from

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social interaction.

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, we are

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losing

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loosing

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losing

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our vital social skills

such

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as communication, empathy,

sympothy

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sympathy

, emotional understanding.

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, the competition between

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lead

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to focusing on

the

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sensational and viral

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to attract more viewers.

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they are avoiding or neglecting the moral values and commitment to

society

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.They become greedy corporators and concentrate only on profit despite the thought of

media

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is considered as the fourth pillar of our constitution.

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, recently the

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had celebrated a

pocso

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photo

case for weeks , but the court had acquitted him following the negative result of DNA .

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released

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from prison, due to the

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impact

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couldnot

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could not

ready

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to accept him and

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he committed suicide.

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but not least, sometimes

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as a

media

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of spreading

rumerous

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numerous

of

celeberaties

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celebrities

and politicians without looking the truth side.

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,

media

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has

lot

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of advantages in our

society

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such

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as

enable

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society

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to think progressively ,

help

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weaker

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society

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to bring forth and make to come out the real face of our

society

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.To be precise,

media

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and

news

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channels

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are

considering

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as the fourth pillar of our

consitution

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constitution

.

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, it helps to bring out corruption and

real

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face of authorities . I

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believe

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belive

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believe

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, only the cause of

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existence

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politicens

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politicians

politics

and our government working properly .

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,it helps us to know the world

news

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and increase knowledge from our comfortable place ,it leads

adapt

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new avenues for our success.The significant fact is that

,

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it helps our weaker

society

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and shows their difficulties what are they suffer from authorities and power class of communities. To conclude,

eventhough

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even though

, it has

advantage

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an advantage

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in our

society

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,

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are working as

profit making

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companies.

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, they are focusing on

the

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apply

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viral matters to attract more viewers despite moral values and real

news

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