You live in a room in college which you share with another student. There are many problems with this arrangement and you find it difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter: • describe the situation • explain the problems and why is it difficult to work • say how you would like the situation resolved.

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Dear Warden, I am writing

this

letter to complain about my roommate. His behaviour is an unbearable and polar opposite to mine. I have been living in

room

number 32, building A-i for the

last

three months with

this

boy. He use to party daily with his friends in our

room

to midnight and they play music too.

Although

, my

last

roommate was a quiet person and humble. But, he is my senior and do not want to follow the basic ethics to share a

room

with me. As my semester final is approaching and I have to study in a quiet place. Kindly advise my roommate to minimise these disturbances.

Otherwise

, I request you to shift me to another

room

, preferably with one of my classmates because it is easy for me to study together with him. I hope, you will understand the situation and solve it on an urgent basis. Yours faithfully, Harpreet Sangha

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4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
0Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

156 words

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Topic Vocabulary:

accommodation officer
roommate
share a room
living arrangement
difficult to work
noise levels
study environment
privacy concerns
alternative accommodation
single room
academic performance
well-being
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