Some people believe that the differencebetween the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that the employees should get fair
wages
and, the difference between the highest paid
jobs
and the
lowest paid
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jobs
should be decreased. In my option, I cannot entirely agree with it, the reason is that employees only get the amount of wage, are depending on their
degree
level and their professional
jobs
.
Firstly
, people who have bachelor or master
degrees
often have a wide of range
job
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opportunities than those who do not have
degrees
. It is natural that they will get offered in bigger and popular companies, and by ,
it
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they will get highly paid too,
for instance
, an accountant who did a master
degree
and work in
for example
Nordea. It is obvious that they will get higher
wages
due to
the
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their professionalism.
On the other hand
, those who have no
degree
,
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will often have fewer
job
opportunities. They may have
the
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job
types that do not require any
degrees
,
for instance
, a salesperson does not need a
degree
in order to do the
job
.
Therefore
,
such
job
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get the lowest paid due to no demand, the reason is that the
job
type does not require high education.
Therefore
they do not get the same wage as
for example
a doctor´s salary. In conclusion,
Although
those who do not have
degrees
, should still get reasonable
wages
.
Furthermore
, It is obvious that those who have
a professional
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a professional job
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jobs
,
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should get higher
wages
than those who do not have. No matter what, all the employees should get reasonable
wages
, depending on their level.
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