Some people believe that the differencebetween the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Some people argue that the employees should get fair
wages
and, the difference between the highest paid jobs
and the lowest paid
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lowest-paid
jobs
should be decreased. In my option, I cannot entirely agree with it, the reason is that employees only get the amount of wage, are depending on their degree
level and their professional jobs
.
Firstly
, people who have bachelor or master degrees
often have a wide of range job
opportunities than those who do not have Change preposition
of job
degrees
. It is natural that they will get offered in bigger and popular companies, and by ,it
they will get highly paid too, Correct pronoun usage
apply
for instance
, an accountant who did a master degree
and work in for example
Nordea. It is obvious that they will get higher wages
due to the
their professionalism.
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apply
On the other hand
, those who have no degree
,
will often have fewer Remove the comma
apply
job
opportunities. They may have the
Correct article usage
apply
job
types that do not require any degrees
, for instance
, a salesperson does not need a degree
in order to do the job
. Therefore
, such
job
get the lowest paid due to no demand, the reason is that the Fix the agreement mistake
jobs
job
type does not require high education. Therefore
they do not get the same wage as for example
a doctor´s salary.
In conclusion, Although
those who do not have degrees
, should still get reasonable wages
. Furthermore
, It is obvious that those who have a professional
Correct the article-noun agreement
a professional job
professional jobs
jobs
,
should get higher Remove the comma
apply
wages
than those who do not have. No matter what, all the employees should get reasonable wages
, depending on their level.Submitted by rabia.sono on
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