Some people believe that the differencebetween the lowest paid jobs and the highest paid jobs should be reduced To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people argue that the employees should get fair

wages

and, the difference between the highest paid

jobs

and the

lowest paid

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jobs

should be decreased. In my option, I cannot entirely agree with it, the reason is that employees only get the amount of wage, are depending on their

degree

level and their professional

jobs

.

Firstly

, people who have bachelor or master

degrees

often have a wide of range

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opportunities than those who do not have

degrees

. It is natural that they will get offered in bigger and popular companies, and by ,

it

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they will get highly paid too,

for instance

, an accountant who did a master

degree

and work in

for example

Nordea. It is obvious that they will get higher

wages

due to

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their professionalism.

On the other hand

, those who have no

degree

,

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will often have fewer

job

opportunities. They may have

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job

types that do not require any

degrees

,

for instance

, a salesperson does not need a

degree

in order to do the

job

.

Therefore

,

such

job

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get the lowest paid due to no demand, the reason is that the

job

type does not require high education.

Therefore

they do not get the same wage as

for example

a doctor´s salary. In conclusion,

Although

those who do not have

degrees

, should still get reasonable

wages

.

Furthermore

, It is obvious that those who have

a professional

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a professional job

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jobs

,

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should get higher

wages

than those who do not have. No matter what, all the employees should get reasonable

wages

, depending on their level.