Some people think that a sense of competition in children should be encouraged. Others believe that children who are taught to co-operate rather than compete become more useful adults. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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era, competition is the primary aspect of each and every person's life. Some think that the children should be motivated by competition while others say that the kids is being studying together.

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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand,

competitiveness

is the utmost significant

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among the world, everyone should have

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skill to will achieve their desire

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goals

or objectives who the

school boys

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. Since childhood period, competitive

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mindset

gives more

banefits

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benefits

to the kids in future days undoubtedly,

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, they can be faced any

unpleseant

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unpleasant

sitiation

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situation

in upcoming years.

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,

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system in school can create more

competitiveness

between the co- learns in order to they will be a

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successful

person in future.

Therefore

, these parts of

competitiveness

can bring more success and achievements so should be

encourged

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encouraged

to the kids to do more competitive in any actions.

On the other hand

, co-operative is the most vital factors for child

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because

since childhood period they can practice to learn and be with co-person,

as a result

, he will be

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unity among society. When a man learns together while he has a chance to

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their doubts and getting

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from co-students,

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means knowledge is

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spread

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tremendously.

For instance

, a recent report said that more than 50% of the pupils get more

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when they are taught in a group study. To conclude,

competitiveness

is very important for in

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busy world so the offsprings should be motivated by competition since they are young. group learning creates unity, sharing of knowledge. In my opinion, about

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, the offsprings should be encouraged by the

competitiveness

in order to they will be achieved their goals and success.