Some people say that the Internet is responsible for destroying the social skills of teenagers and young adults. Why do you think the Internet is seen as dangerous in this way and what can we do to ensure that it does not harm the social development of teenagers and young adults?

Over the
last
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before due to
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advancement and people need and wants have been
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social ability
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affected by using the
internet
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adverse and there are some actions to will
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youngsters. One of the main causes is that
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can lead to addicting the teenagers by using
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and
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,
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, they never like to interact with society even their family members too.
This
terrible situation might be brought by many mental
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related
issues like
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depression
, stress. Another reason is that
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long hours of using and seeing high
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screen,
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be used to protecting to our minors. One possible solution is the parents should monitor to their
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activity
such
as how long they will spend on the
internet
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limit to using the
internet
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awareness about using the
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effects too.
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ministry has started to
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the
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at the schools and colleges,
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of Indian folks can be reduced
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enormously. To conclude,
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always creates
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child,
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can easily
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using the
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minors cannot interact
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their neighbours and gets more mental diseases.
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children
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especially the young one's and they should be given some time limits of using the
internet
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process is conducive to
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building
a healthy society,
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Distraction
  • Isolation
  • Face-to-face interactions
  • Cyberbullying
  • Anonymity
  • Harassment
  • Social media
  • Superficial relationships
  • Sedentary lifestyle
  • Communication skills
  • Virtual validation
  • Self-esteem
  • Online communities
  • Parental guidance
  • Digital literacy
  • Awareness programs
  • Constructive use
  • Setting boundaries
  • Social development
  • Meaningful connections
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