Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

There is no doubt that these days video
games
are becoming common and play a significant role in
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children
's
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. The question is, are violent
games
the reason
to
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increased rates of
crime
and
violence
in the most important and greatest of world cities? In
this
essay, I am going to discuss
this
issue and draw my own conclusion. In terms of some views, most people, and among them is me, strongly believe it is too much to say that aggressive video
games
are the cause of increased
crime
in the world. The main reason given to support
this
claim is that looking at the past centuries there have been a lot of constant wars and fighting with weapons and a lot of dangerous tools. To illustrate, those previous years for mankind show that training
children
on the real killing and fighting
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tremendously crucial for strengthening
children
's character and ability to protect themselves from enemies or enemies of the homeland.
in contrast
, most
children
's fights at present are limited
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virtual
games
.
In other words
, it is not
games
that
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global
violence
and it can not be
children
's
games
that cause
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increase
crime
.
However
,
on the other hand
, concern about
games
violence
leads to criminal acts.
Firstly
, there is no doubt that
violence
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games
have
impact
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on
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kids'
behavior
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. In the other words, the people who
their
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aged under 15 years old tend to imitate other persons especially if it is aggressive.
secondly
, playing
games
that promote
violence
, result in
children
introverted
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.
This
is because they play it several times and particularly when they play video
games
, they just sit in
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front of the TV for a long time and without doing anything else useful. In conclusion,
although
playing violent
games
have unbelievable influences, it has many boons as well.
Therefore
, I believe that the rise of brutality and
crime
is not related
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children
's
games
, and there are other root causes that should be investigated.
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