Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

There is no doubt that these days video

games

are becoming common and play a significant role in

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children

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routine

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. The question is, are violent

games

the reason

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increased rates of

crime

and

violence

in the most important and greatest of world cities? In

this

essay, I am going to discuss

this

issue and draw my own conclusion. In terms of some views, most people, and among them is me, strongly believe it is too much to say that aggressive video

games

are the cause of increased

crime

in the world. The main reason given to support

this

claim is that looking at the past centuries there have been a lot of constant wars and fighting with weapons and a lot of dangerous tools. To illustrate, those previous years for mankind show that training

children

on the real killing and fighting

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tremendously crucial for strengthening

children

's character and ability to protect themselves from enemies or enemies of the homeland.

in contrast

, most

children

's fights at present are limited

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virtual

games

.

In other words

, it is not

games

that

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global

violence

and it can not be

children

's

games

that cause

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increase

crime

.

However

,

on the other hand

, concern about

games

violence

leads to criminal acts.

Firstly

, there is no doubt that

violence

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games

have

impact

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on

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kids'

behavior

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. In the other words, the people who

their

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aged under 15 years old tend to imitate other persons especially if it is aggressive.

secondly

, playing

games

that promote

violence

, result in

children

introverted

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.

This

is because they play it several times and particularly when they play video

games

, they just sit in

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front of the TV for a long time and without doing anything else useful. In conclusion,

although

playing violent

games

have unbelievable influences, it has many boons as well.

Therefore

, I believe that the rise of brutality and

crime

is not related

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children

's

games

, and there are other root causes that should be investigated.