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Children today play very violent games. This must be the reason for the increase in violence and crime in most major cities of the world. What are your opinions on this?

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There is no doubt that these days video
games
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 are becoming common and play a significant role in
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children
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's
routine
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. The question is, are violent
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 the reason
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 increased rates of
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 and
violence
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 in the most important and greatest of world cities? In
this
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 essay, I am going to discuss
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 issue and draw my own conclusion. In terms of some views, most people, and among them is me, strongly believe it is too much to say that aggressive video
games
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 are the cause of increased
crime
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 in the world. The main reason given to support
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 claim is that looking at the past centuries there have been a lot of constant wars and fighting with weapons and a lot of dangerous tools. To illustrate, those previous years for mankind show that training
children
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 on the real killing and fighting
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 tremendously crucial for strengthening
children
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's character and ability to protect themselves from enemies or enemies of the homeland.
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, most
children
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's fights at present are limited
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 virtual
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.
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, it is not
games
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 that
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the
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global
violence
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 and it can not be
children
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's
games
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 that cause
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increase
crime
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.
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,
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, concern about
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violence
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 leads to criminal acts.
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, there is no doubt that
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violence
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violent
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games
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 have
impact
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 on
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kids'
behavior
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. In the other words, the people who
their
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 aged under 15 years old tend to imitate other persons especially if it is aggressive.
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, playing
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 that promote
violence
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, result in
children
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introverted
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.
This
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 is because they play it several times and particularly when they play video
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, they just sit in
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front of the TV for a long time and without doing anything else useful. In conclusion,
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 playing violent
games
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 have unbelievable influences, it has many boons as well.
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, I believe that the rise of brutality and
crime
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 is not related
of
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children
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's
games
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, and there are other root causes that should be investigated.
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