People nowadays tend to have children at older ages. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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In recent years, many individuals decide to have youth at older ages, I agreed with them and I will discuss numerous advantages in
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essay. The only disadvantage of having kids at older ages is that you want to have multiple kids,
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, you need
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earlier. But about the
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I described my reasons in the below paragraphs.
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, having a baby late allows the couple to be financially and mentally strong, so that, you do not have to work hard and do not worry about having
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for your infant,
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raising a child needs resilience that if your mind is busy all the
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, you cannot focus on it.
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, the most significant benefit of having infants at old age is parent’s maturity that allows them to behave high-minded,
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, parents had
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to study and read about raising children and prepare for it.
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, they can read about child psychological stages of development, learn about each stage, understand the child’s world and whatever shapes the child’s mind.
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, the relationship between parents needs to be strong,
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, the father and mother want more
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to know each other and solve their problems before having a teenager. I know plenty of people though, they couldn’t find any solution for their disputes yet, they brought a child to their turbulent life and they will transfer their bad characteristics to him for sure. To conclude,
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, when to have children is according to couple’s decision, but they must do it watchfully, bringing somebody to
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world is a big responsibility, because he does not ask to bring him, you decide to, so if you cannot get over it, you are responsible for his future.
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