Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

There is no denying to fact that our lives are very precious.

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, we should spend it in a proper way.

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it is a commonly held belief that some

persons

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want to

doing

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same

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the same

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thing for

whole

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their whole

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life. There is

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an argument that the change is needed to

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flexible

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life.

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essay will discuss

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topic from both points of view

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and express my opinion. On one hand, some people prefer to

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similar habits and business for

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time without any change,

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some of them pleasant with

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same

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friends.

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trend

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related only to the places or habits,

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also

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but also

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relation

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with

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relationship

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relationship,

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that’s

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means

reject

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rejecting

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building new

connection

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with

newly

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partners and Colleagues.

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, there are some

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that people tend to the same, they will have a

psychology

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disorder.

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, when

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elderly and rural person. Those blokes used to

performance

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one job,

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as agriculture and livestock raising,

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also they

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avoid

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avoided

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any contact or creating social bonds with foreigners.

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population

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the population

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whose accustomed to

alteration

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their schedules

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they have

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an ideal personality and characteristics.

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, their lives will be

more strong

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and

healthy

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, free from any depression.

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, it could be

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source for those to expand their horizons,

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as students or adults who are

study

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more than one

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or have

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. In conclusion, there are no easy answers to

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question

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is rely

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a persons

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persons

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culture.

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, I consider

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consequences and benefits of

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issue.

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response

Say your view clearly at the start with a simple thesis.

development

Give full ideas for each side. Use one clear example for each idea.

cohesion

Use linking words to join ideas. Use first, next, finally, but, however, and also.

grammar

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structure

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content

The essay uses 'on the one hand' and 'on the other hand' to mark clear sides.

content

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Sentence 4 - Outline sentence

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
Sentence 3 - Discussion
Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
Sentence 2 - Example
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Sentence 4 - Conclusion

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Introduction & conclusion present

Supported main points

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

Clear & comprehensive ideas

Relevant & specific examples

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

259 words

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