Some people think that zoos are cruel and should be closed down. Others, however, believe that zoos can be useful in protecting wild animals.   Discuss both views and give your opinion.

It is often an argued issue whether animals captivity is best or

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, some say that

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should not be opened for

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of wildlife while others think that

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are most useful for saving

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from natural

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and hunting.

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essay discusses both viewpoints, I strongly agree with the former opinion for the following reasons. On the one hand, animals are suffered

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being

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in their entire life, its never release

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until

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is a

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process. They are

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a living species,

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has a right to live in their own land like

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a forest

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but some social workers can be put on the cells

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in their

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fully,

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, their breeding process can be affected and they might be

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report by the Blue cross said that animals are being more aggressive whose being inside cells than living

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they will suffer more.

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,

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can be protected the wildlife from natural

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and hunting, nowadays animal

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is the primary adverse effect on

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race. Natural disaster happens

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everywhere to around the world because of global warming while the protectors could save the

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life by

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, in 2020 Australia has suffered tremendously

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, a plethora of

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trees burned by

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while the Australian national animal which is Kangaroo has affected more and they did not have water to

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,

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can be protected our wildlife from these natural repercussions. To conclude, all

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are living with freedom because

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captivity might affect their

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breeding

system and they will be more aggressive by mental stress. But these kinds of

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can save a lot of

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from natural

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namely bush

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. In my opinion, about

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,

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are

most

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useful aspect for nowadays and we have the

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to protect our surrounding species from any catastrophe.