More and more companies are willing to view graduates of online universities on an equal level as those who attended brick-and-mortar classrooms. Discuss the advantages of both styles of learning as it relates to the working world.
In the contemporary world, the number of organizations which are prone to consider the equal status for online and in-person
universities’
graduates is increasing. Change noun form
universities
This
essay will explain that while
online educational systems are more accessible, some fields are not fit to
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for
this
system.
On the one hand, recruitment candidates who studied online have had access to a wider range of knowledge
from all over the globe. Each nation around the world may be more sophisticated in a special field such
as science
or technology and online schooling make
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makes
this
knowledge
more accessible for overseas students. Therefore
, this
provides companies with professionals who have graduated from this
system with the latest updates. France, for example
, is well-known for its strength in management, and organizations in other countries that are not sophisticated in this
subject can use their citizens who are trained in online French courses in management.
On the other hand
, online education may reduce the efficiency of education in some subjects. Some university subjects especially those that are related to science
such
as Medicine or Chemistry require in-person classes because these subjects include numerous laboratory experiments that are not possible throughout distance education. Hence
, teaching these fields through the online system leads to some graduates without sufficient knowledge
. consequently
, science
institutes may face severe problems if they require this
type of expert. University of California, for instance
, transitioned to online learning during the coronavirus pandemic. As a result
, many medicine students reported they have had significant troubles in clinical experiences.
In conclusion, although
online learning may offer companies and employees more developed knowledge
, brick-and-mortar classrooms are crucial for clinical science
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introduction
Ensure a clear and balanced introduction that outlines the main points to be discussed. Although the introduction sets up the topic nicely, a slightly clearer declaration of both the advantages and limitations could help in guiding the reader.
logical structure
Make sure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence, followed by supporting sentences with examples. While the essay contains logical paragraphs, occasionally the transitions between ideas are not as smooth as they could be.
conclusion
Avoid redundancy and ensure each paragraph contributes a unique point to the argument. The conclusion aptly summarizes the content but slightly repetitive in language.
task response
The essay successfully discusses advantages of online learning by providing specific examples, such as the case of France and management education.
coherence
The essay is structured into clear paragraphs that each address different points related to the discussion topic.
task response
The use of specific and relevant examples helps to strengthen the argument, such as the example of the University of California during the pandemic.
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