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Some people think that the news channels and media nowadays have sensationalised and influenced people’s lives in negative ways. Others disagree and say that it is also positive. Discuss both views and give your opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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The
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's intervention in celebrity lives has increased to a great extent in
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 modern world. While some
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 believe that the
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media
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 is persuading sensational
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 lives in a negative
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, others think
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also
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 good for
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. In
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 the former statement is true and cannot be encouraged. Importantly the supporters who think that the aforementioned act is positive for
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 have a reason to say so. They think that it helps a part of
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 members to create opportunities in the
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 industry as it generates a buzz in the public and attracts them to watch television for
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news
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. To cite an example, the TRP ratings of some programmes which are focusing specifically on
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negative content are
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 higher than
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good content ones.
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, it is clearly evident that there is a great scope for the improvement of
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 business or opportunities in the market.
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, others, including me, believe that
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 activities are detrimental to the culture of any nation. To be more precise, it sets a wrong impression
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 the younger generation, which eventually puts the country's prosperity at risk. The recent incident of the famous Bollywood actor Sharukh Khan's son arrest under drug consumption case,
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, would have polluted many youngsters minds in a negative
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.
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, youth would attract
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 activities because of the influence created by the
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 channels.
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, these kinds of
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 to be suppressed by the
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 channels to save the culture of the country. To conclude, some
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 believe that television channels and
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 focus on influential
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 who are creating sensations in the communities are always shown in a negative
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.
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, others feel that they
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 help
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 in a good
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. In the above essay, I have discussed both views and provided necessary examples to back up my opinion to support the former statement.
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