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Many museums charge for admission while others are free. Do you think the advantages of charging people for admission to museum overweight the disadvantages??

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Museums
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 are a great place filled with wonder and mystery, where an individual learns about how their ancestors lived, what kind of items they used, etc. And, some
museums
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 have an admission charge while some do not. I believe the advantage of
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 entry
fee
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 far outweighs its disadvantage because many
museums
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 wouldn’t be able to protect their ancestral possessions without it.
First
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 and foremost, charging a hefty amount on
visitors
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 can undeniably have some adverse effects.
Firstly
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, the entrance
fee
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 can affect the popularity of
museums
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 as the citizens will hesitate to visit
museums
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, and
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 will majorly reduce the number of
visitors
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.
Secondly
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, people will not be able to access essential information and gain knowledge about historical relics, antiquity, etc.
As a result
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, the
museums
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 will be on the verge of extinction.
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,
money
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 collected from the
visitors
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 can be utilised to maintain and develop the
museum
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.
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, it can be used to cover the utility bills, repairing
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, renovation and staff
costs
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. Maintaining a large
museum
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costs
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 a huge amount of
money
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 and the revenue earned from the
visitors
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 could be a good source of
money
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 to do that. Not all
museums
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 are funded by the government and sometimes
museums
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' fund is not enough to cover all the
costs
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 it requires. If no
money
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 is taken from
visitors
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,
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museums
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 would have to be shut down. So, the admission
fee
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 in
museums
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 seems very utilitarian to maintain a better
museum
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. To sum up, making all
museums
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 accessible without the entrance
fee
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 would encourage more people to appreciate and visit, but it won’t be operated and developed effectively.
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, posing a nominal entrance
fee
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 can be verily advantageous in several ways for the
museum
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.
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