Some people believe that the government should help the unemployed on a weekly basis. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.
Nowadays, there are many unemployed people over the world and many countries raise
this
issue to be a big issue that must solve immediately. Some individuals believe that government
should provide money to them once a week for living in society. From my point of view, I personally disagree with this
idea for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.
To begin
with, helping unemployment
by providing financial support is an easy solution
to solve this
problem due to money is an important thing that most of them wants for their living, but this
kind of people is laziness among the country citizens. Sometimes it will be a bad solution
and provide many impacts to other residents and it will be a cause of other issues. For example
, some countries provide too many funds for helping this
kind of people for a long time, but the unemployment
rate is continually increased for a decade. It shows that this
solution
is not effective, and government
should focus on other sectors such
as education or public health.
On the other hand
, the government
should help the unemployed to find jobs and earn salaries by themselves that they will not wait for financial support from the government
. It will be a sustainable solution
and the unemployment
rate will be surprisingly decreased. For instance
, the government
can arrange a centre for helping them find jobs, it will be a good condition for a company that find new employees as well. If government
use this
condition, it can reduce budget cost in this
sector and provide in an important sector which will make their residents have good qualities of life.
In conclusion, for the reason that I mentioned above
I personally disagree with Add a comma
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this
topic, but it is undeniable that a solution
is mentioned in a topic that can help unemployment
too but in the short term. So, if they want a sustainable solution
, the government
should not use this
solution
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite