Some people believe that the government should help the unemployed on a weekly basis. Do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give your opinion.

Nowadays, there are many unemployed people over the world and many countries raise

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issue to be a big issue that must solve immediately. Some individuals believe that

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should provide money to them once a week for living in society. From my point of view, I personally disagree with

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idea for many reasons, described in the following paragraphs.

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with, helping

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by providing financial support is an easy

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to solve

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problem due to money is an important thing that most of them wants for their living, but

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kind of people is laziness among the country citizens. Sometimes it will be a bad

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and provide many impacts to other residents and it will be a cause of other issues.

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, some countries provide too many funds for helping

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kind of people for a long time, but the

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rate is continually increased for a decade. It shows that

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is not effective, and

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should focus on other sectors

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as education or public health.

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, the

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should help the unemployed to find jobs and earn salaries by themselves that they will not wait for financial support from the

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. It will be a sustainable

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and the

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rate will be surprisingly decreased.

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, the

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can arrange a centre for helping them find jobs, it will be a good condition for a company that find new employees as well. If

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use

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condition, it can reduce budget cost in

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sector and provide in an important sector which will make their residents have good qualities of life. In conclusion, for the reason that I mentioned

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I personally disagree with

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topic, but it is undeniable that a

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is mentioned in a topic that can help

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too but in the short term. So, if they want a sustainable

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, the

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should not use

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.