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Spoken communication is more powerful than written communication.

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There is an opinion that speaking is more powerful than writing. Personally, I agree with
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 point of view, owing to the benefits of face-to-face
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. Of course, one might argue that it is much easier to be in touch by speaking. That's because spoken
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 allows us to express our emotions and feelings directly, so it ensures that our ideas
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 the conversation can be shown clearly.
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, I find it productive to inspire other
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 through words.
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, in some wildlife preservation propaganda campaigns, the campaigners always use the micro to volume up the sound when they raise their voice to attract a crowd, and it always brings positive results.
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, Oral
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 enables speakers to emotionally connect with their listeners. The tone of someone’s voice can powerfully convey a wide range of emotions, and
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 why some
people
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 are able to inspire and influence others simply through a powerful speech, a song, or a piece of poetry.
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, misunderstandings can
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 be easily prevented when
people
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 interact face to face.
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, written
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 is suitable for formal letters or messages, because we tend to more carefully when we select words and always think back about the idea of the message when we write something.
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, it ensures high accuracy and polite content for each letter.
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, written material is more convenient for rereading and it is able to save information for reading again,
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 as important contracts.
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, in the workplace emails and documents are effective tools,
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 a speech sometimes is interrupted or ignored in some ways, these written materials can be stated very well. In conclusion, both spoken and written modes of
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 have their own purposes, benefits and drawbacks, and
people
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 have to carefully consider which mode to apply in each specific situation.

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coherence cohesion
Ensure that all points are clearly connected and logically flow from one to the next. Avoid redundancy and ensure the structure maintains clarity.
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Improve the use of varied sentence structures and enhance vocabulary to make your essay more compelling.
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Be mindful of minor grammatical errors, as they can impact the overall readability of the essay.
coherence cohesion
The essay has a clear introduction and conclusion, which helps to frame the argument effectively.
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Your essay effectively explores both sides of the argument, which demonstrates a balanced and thorough understanding of the topic.
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The use of specific examples, such as the wildlife preservation propaganda campaigns, adds depth to your arguments and supports your main points well.

Your opinion

Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.

If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.

Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.

Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:

...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?

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