Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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At present, not only are there a lot of programs and courses to study but
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there are many students that want an opportunity in a
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or college. Every day the students that ask for a seat at
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are more than places offered.
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the reason why universities must have a system to assign standings.
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system has to be hard, with justice and part of
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filter is to evaluate the level of aspirants' abilities. I agree with the universities that have strict selection systems because it is a way to filter the most capable persons to study a professional career. Sadly, not all the universities have these well-thought systems. When I studied at UNAM, there was a policy that allowed students that had studied the high school at the same UNAM, they should pass automatically to
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of the grades that they had. I could find lot of
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that didn't have abilities, interest of studying and been well prepared. Only those
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went to the
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to have friends, to pass the time. For me, it is not fair, as many standings were used by these
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and were wasted. If my
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had had a strict policy to assign seats, it would have the most qualified persons to study. In society is needed to have all kinds of
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: professional and not professional one since there are many jobs that have to be performed and no a professional career is needed,
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some of these jobs are: janitor, garbage collector, post office man.
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why no everybody needs to come at a
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. Maybe it sounds cruel that
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have to be filtered but, it is part of a modern evolution: only survive the more capable or intelligent.
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