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Everybody should be allowed admission to university or college programs regardless of their level of academic ability. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement? Give reasons for your answer and include relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience

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At present, not only are there a lot of programs and courses to study but
also
 there are many students that want an opportunity in a
university
 or college. Every day the students that ask for a seat at
university
 are more than places offered.
That is
 the reason why universities must have a system to assign standings.
This
 system has to be hard, with justice and part of
this
 filter is to evaluate the level of aspirants' abilities. I agree with the universities that have strict selection systems because it is a way to filter the most capable persons to study a professional career. Sadly, not all the universities have these well-thought systems. When I studied at UNAM, there was a policy that allowed students that had studied the high school at the same UNAM, they should pass automatically to
university
,
instead
 of the grades that they had. I could find lot of
people
 that didn't have abilities, interest of studying and been well prepared. Only those
people
 went to the
university
 to have friends, to pass the time. For me, it is not fair, as many standings were used by these
people
 and were wasted. If my
university
 had had a strict policy to assign seats, it would have the most qualified persons to study. In society is needed to have all kinds of
people
: professional and not professional one since there are many jobs that have to be performed and no a professional career is needed,
for example
 some of these jobs are: janitor, garbage collector, post office man.
That is
 why no everybody needs to come at a
university
. Maybe it sounds cruel that
people
 have to be filtered but, it is part of a modern evolution: only survive the more capable or intelligent.
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