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Nowadays, more people are choosing to socialise online rather than face to face. Is this a positive or negative development?

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One of the heated issues is some
people
 believe that communicating online is better than
face
 to
face
.
On the other hand
, some individuals think that talking in person is better than talking online. From my perspective, there are both advantages and disadvantages to communicating with other
people
 but, I prefer to socialize on the internet. It is generally accepted that most individuals think that communicating with a person
face
 to
face
 is feel more emotional than online and they can take part easily
for example
, if some groups of pupils talk about the study they will participate easier than online.
On the contrary
, communicating online is comfortable to talk anywhere and anytime
such
 as when the workers are at work so they do not have to go out for contact with others.
Moreover
, there are a lot of channels to contact the other workers in the wild world. For many
people
 around the world, making friends online is a waste of money because the users have to pay for the internet fees and some the transportation fees to make friends
face
 to
face
.
However
, it can make individuals know the foreign
people
 from the internet because nowadays, many users use the online channel to find foreigners to be a mate. To illustrate, Tom likes to find some international buddies to go hangout with or travel with.
Furthermore
, making some friends with foreigners is many benefits
such
 as having more buddies and contacts. In conclusion, it seems to me that associating online and
face
 to
face
 are both positive and negative ways, it depends on the person and what they prefer to use to socialize.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • social media platforms
  • online interactions
  • virtual communication
  • global community
  • interpersonal skills
  • digital divide
  • cyberspace
  • virtual presence
  • social networking
  • mental wellbeing
  • digital literacy
  • safe spaces
  • marginalized groups
  • face-to-face communication
  • socialisation
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