You saw a brochure for a one-week walking tour in the mountains. You're very interested in taking part, but you're not very fit and are worried you wouldn't be able to keep up. Write to the tour operator. In your letter: • Explain why you're interested in the tour. • Ask for information about dates and prices. • Express your concerns about your fitness level.

Dear Sir / Ma'am, I am writing
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detailed information about the walking tour in the mountains. I saw your brochure regarding
this
trip to the
mountatin
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mountain
mountains
by walking. I personally love mountains but due to my hand
injury
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i
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couldnt
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couldn't
opt for tracking there.
However
, walking in
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mountain
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is a dream come true for me as
i
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do brisk
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everyday
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and it
wouldnt
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wouldn't
be a problem for me
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it.
Although
, being an
ashtametic
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asthmatic
patient, sometimes I face breathing issues at height and I might not able to keep going
further
. Would there be any aid for the same and send me back home just in case anything happen? Since I want to ask for the
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advance from my work, if you could let me know the tenure of
this
trip, when is the starting date and how much does it charge for the entire tour? I hope to hear from you soon. Thank You. Yours faithfully,
Brijal
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Bridal
Brinjal
Desai
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