A friend of yours is thinking of going to a camping holiday for the first time this summer. He has asked for your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: explain why you think your friend would enjoy camping. holiday describe some possible disadvantages say whether you would like to go on camping with your friend this summer
Dear Kavya,
I hope you are doing well! I was excited when I heard that you are thinking of going on a camping holiday
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as bears, wolves, and elephants. You must make sure that you take some local guide with you to lead you on the safe path. But honestly, you must experience that fun and adventure travel.
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trip if you and your friends are good to take me. Since I have been to the campaign two times I would be a great guide for you all. Let me know what you think.
looking forward to hearing from you soon.
With love,
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Submitted by neejamalan0420 on
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spelling
Be cautious with spelling mistakes such as 'campaign' instead of 'camping.'
coherence
Try to organize the ideas in such a way that one paragraph addresses each main point (enjoyment of camping, disadvantages, invitation to join).
writing tone
The tone of the letter is friendly and appropriate for writing to a friend.
task response
You've successfully addressed all parts of the task including the reasons for enjoyment, possible disadvantages, and invitation to join.
coherence
Good use of an opening and a closing, making the letter feel complete.
The Closing
The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.
Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.
Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)
- Yours faithfully,
Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)
- Yours sincerely,
Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)
- Best regards,
- Warm wishes,