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Band 7

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have just moved into a new home and are planning to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter introduce yourself describe your plans for the party invite your neighbour to come You do NOT need to write any addresses. You should write at least 150 words

#minutes #home #party #noise #neighbour #plans #addresses
Dear Mr Paul, I am writing
this
 letter to invite you to our house party taking place
this
 weekend from 8PM onwards.
First
 I would like to introduce myself to you.My name is John, your new neighbour.My house is right
next
 to yours.We are still settling up the house ,
Hopefully
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 it will be done in the
next
 two days.Since we moving to
this
 new place , we are planning for a small party with my close friends
this
 weekend .I am sure it will be a bit noisy than usual because of the celebration .But I
also
 don't want it to be a disturbance for any of my neighbours. At the same time
i
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 would be happy if you come and join with us for the dinner and
also
 that helps us to know each other very well.I will be looking forward to having you at our party . Yours Sincerely , john
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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