When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

Undoubtedly,
urbar
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urban
planning has become one of
integral
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aspects
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construction
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line. Few individuals believe that more importance should be given to shopping
centers
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, while, others give
pirority
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priority
to
construction
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the construction
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of public
parks
or sports facilities where they can spend their leisure time. Both
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aspects will be discussed in the essay. On one hand,
majority
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of people are more inclined towards shopping
centers
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for their needs and
also
for spending their leisure time,
therefore
, shopping
centers
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are being placed while new towns are designed by planners strategically. There
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day to day needs for consumables like
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clothes
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cloths
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and household items. If shopping
centers
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are not available in close vicinity, where an individual is supposed to go? Out of town?. In my city, close to my township 'Orange county', there is a big shopping complex where I fetch whatever I require at any time.
Hence
, these shopping
centers
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are
integral
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part of cities and are to be included in
construction
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plan of any new town.
On the other hand
, public
parks
or any sports clubs could have been more
advantegeous
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advantageous
over concrete buildings of malls
beacuse
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because
they provide
oportunity
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opportunity
to individuals to inculcate healthy habits in
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routine. Being in the park, in
morning
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or evening, one may do various types of exercises like yoga and
jogging
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or relax. To cite an example, in Delhi nowadays more
parks
are being constructed for
public
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which
are
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being utilized by all age groups to go various exercises.
Therefore
, for the betterment of locals from
health
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point of view, these
parks
are fruitful for them. To conclude, though,
boths
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both
parks
and shopping complexes have their own advantages, but in my opinion planning of
construction
of
parks
shall be more
piroritized
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prioritized
prioritised
by increasing their numbers in city' layout so that people can reap benefits rather than just shopping.
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