When new towns are planned, it is important to build more public parks or sports facilities than shopping centers for people to spend their free time. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
Undoubtedly,
urbar
planning has become one of Correct your spelling
urban
integral
aspects Add an article
the integral
in
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of
construction
line. Few individuals believe that more importance should be given to shopping Correct article usage
the construction
centers
, while, others give Change the spelling
centres
pirority
to Correct your spelling
priority
construction
of public Add an article
the construction
parks
or sports facilities where they can spend their leisure time. Both the
aspects will be discussed in the essay.
On one hand, Correct article usage
apply
majority
of people are more inclined towards shopping Correct article usage
the majority
centers
for their needs and Change the spelling
centres
also
for spending their leisure time, therefore
, shopping centers
are being placed while new towns are designed by planners strategically. There Change the spelling
centres
are
day to day needs for consumables like Change the verb form
is
Correct your spelling
clothes
cloths
and household items. If shopping Correct your spelling
clothes
centers
are not available in close vicinity, where an individual is supposed to go? Out of town?. In my city, close to my township 'Orange county', there is a big shopping complex where I fetch whatever I require at any time. Change the spelling
centres
Hence
, these shopping centers
are Change the spelling
centres
integral
part of cities and are to be included in Change the article
an integral
construction
plan of any new town.
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the construction
On the other hand
, public parks
or any sports clubs could have been more advantegeous
over concrete buildings of malls Correct your spelling
advantageous
beacuse
they provide Correct your spelling
because
oportunity
to individuals to inculcate healthy habits in Correct your spelling
opportunity
once daily
routine. Being in the park, in Add a hyphen
once-daily
morning
or evening, one may do various types of exercises like yoga and Correct article usage
the morning
jogging
or relax. To cite an example, in Delhi nowadays more Change the verb form
jog
parks
are being constructed for public
which Add an article
the public
a public
are
being utilized by all age groups to go various exercises. Change the verb form
is
Therefore
, for the betterment of locals from health
point of view, these Add an article
a health
the health
parks
are fruitful for them.
To conclude, though, boths
Correct your spelling
both
parks
and shopping complexes have their own advantages, but in my opinion planning of construction
of parks
shall be more piroritized
by increasing their numbers in city' layout so that people can reap benefits rather than just shopping.Correct your spelling
prioritized
prioritised
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