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You recently spent the week on holiday at your friend's house. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter; - Say what you like about your friend's new house - Say what you enjoyed most about your holiday - Suggest when and where you could meet next

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Dear Saman, I'm writing to say a big thank you for having me over
last
 week, I had a really good time. Love your new home. The garden is fascinating. Sitting in your garden was great because of the vivid flowers and the decorations. Since it's spacious you can host so many people at once. I loved the city tour we had. Your hometown is a great place to raise a family because It's a vibrant place and full of required amenities. The dinner we had from that Chinese restaurant was the greatest I had so far. I tried to make that dish at home but failed to get the same taste and aroma. Let's meet soon. Maybe you could come to my home for dinner? How about the first weekend of next month? let me know ASAP. Thanks again for the great holiday. looking forward to seeing you soon. Best wishes, Sangeeth
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph has a single clear idea supported by relevant details.
coherence cohesion
Organize your ideas logically within the letter to make reading easier.
task achievement
The letter achieves the task effectively by addressing all bullet points: appreciation of the friend's house, enjoyment of the holiday, and suggestion for a future meeting.
task achievement
Engages the reader with a warm and friendly tone, which is suitable for the task of writing to a friend.
coherence cohesion
Starts with a clear greeting and ends with a thoughtful closing, contributing to a positive communication experience.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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