You borrowed something from your friend, later it got damaged. Write letter to your friend. In your letter, you should: • apology about the issue • tell how it got damaged • say you are going to fix this issue

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Hello John, How are you? I hope

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letter finds you well. It was so humble of you to lend your spare mobile to me, on my journey back home. I couldn't be thankful enough for the purpose it served. It is with a heavy heart that I bring it to you that the display of the phone you lent me got damaged. I feel bad for not being more careful in the

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I handled it. I was hoping to return you the mobile, once I get settled here. But, I didn't see

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coming.

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happened precisely at the airport exit, while I was trying to book a taxi for my

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home. It slipped off from my hands when a stranger bumped into me, as he was in an urgency to board his flight. He was nowhere to be found

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when I realised the damage he had caused. I really feel terrible to bring

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to you. On that note, I wanted to let you know that I will ensure to fix the display the

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it was. I have

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checked with a few other service centres in my locale.

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shouldn't cost much and whatever it costs, I'll bear it for being careless. I hope I could fix the same over

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weekend. Once done, I'll make sure it reaches you in a couple of days as the

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you gave it to me. Thank You Best regards Arthur

Arun Tue Nov 02 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

244 words

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