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Some people think that parents teach children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the place to learn this. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

#people #parents #children #members #society #school #place
Schools
 are the
second
 home for
children
 that they can learn a lot about communication and
society
,
also
parents
 have an important role in encouraging kids to act well in
society
. I think both of them have a primary role and I try to describe it in the following. I think
schools
 in traditional form of it are completely useless in teaching skills to
children
, many
schools
 all around the world have tried to change the environment and train
moreover
 skills to
children
 and some of them have been successful, but if you ask me,
schools
 should be a place to learn life skills and a little of math o science because
children
 in that ages want have exiting experience and their mind are full of curiosity,
schools
 must satisfy those curieses.
On the other hand
,
parents
 act as leaders in teaching
children
 at home, the most important duty of any
parents
 is that teach their youth how to think, how to analyze problems and divide them into small parts and
then
 how to solve them After that
parents
 do not need to worry about their
children
’s manners because if you teach your
children
 how to find solutions for their problems so that they can find their ways.
Thus
, they created a tough and good fundamental ‘rational thinking’
that is
 so beneficial to
children
 and
finally
 to
society
. To conclude, I think both of their
schools
 and especially
parents
 are necessary to teach
children
 how to act well in
society
. If
schools
 teach
children
 to manner good and
parents
 do not do their job so that
children
 won't learn because they are items in a system that if any of them does not work well, all other items will fail.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • good members of society
  • teach
  • parents
  • schools
  • responsibility
  • values
  • respect
  • empathy
  • responsibility
  • formal education
  • citizenship
  • ethics
  • social responsibility
  • lead by example
  • role models
  • conducive environment
  • extracurricular activities
  • community involvement
  • collaborate
  • holistic approach
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