People in big cities are facing many health challenges due to a high level of air pollution. What causes air pollution in big cities? Can you suggest some ways to deal with this situation?

It is believed by some
people
that the pollution is getting increased day by day in the big cities and
people
have to face health risks due to
this
problem.
This
essay will discuss the reason and the solution for the issue.
To begin
with
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the
first
reason is the increase in the number of cars and motorbikes. These days everyone wants his/her personal vehicle and does not want to
use
public transportation because of bad services, so it raises the level of pollution in the air as well as the traffic on roads.
Second
, the smoke from the factories, because sometimes the factories are placed in the heart of the cities and it adds the more pollutants in the environment.
Third
, the rashless cutting of
trees
in the municipality to make new buildings, roads or footpaths. The presence of less greenery is not able to clean air by absorbing the gases like carbon monoxide. There are many steps that can be taken by the governments and individuals to tackle
this
issue. The
people
can do carpooling and
use
loss cars.
For example
, if 4 person works at the same company or place and lives nearby each other's place,
instead
of using 4 separate cars they can
use
one to go the work.
This
will save the environment, petrol and reduce the traffic on roads.
Secondly
, the government should provide good transportation services and encourage
people
to
use
them.
This
thing can resolve the problem because a bus can carry more than 40
people
at one time but a car has a capacity of 5-7
people
. Another solution is, government and
people
should try to plant more and more
trees
wherever it is possible in the cities. The
last
one is, factories should be placed outside the city and the government should check them and give them guidelines to not to make smoke on their level and reserve some areas for
trees
to be planted. To conclude that, I believe that pollution is increasing but it can be tackled if we all plant more
trees
and make
this
planet more beautiful.
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