Large companies use sport events to promote their products. Some people think this has a negative impact on sports. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

Some people are of the opinion that advertising

products

in occasional

sport

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events

has

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disadvantaged impacts on sports. From my perspective, while

this

argument can be explained for some reasons, I very disagree with

this

statement because big

companies

will bring a lot of benefits for economics and organizations as well as members

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to national teams. It is understandable that why some people subscribe to the view that commercials in

sport

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events

are not relevant for watchers, especially youngsters, who are part of audiences of almost

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all sport

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sport

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events

.

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is because several

manufacturer’s

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manufacturers’

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products

are not good for

healthy

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such

as: tobacco, wine.

This

can lead to unpredictable consequences, which easily attracted the young generation to form

unhealthy

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lifestyle

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or less-minded actions when they use it.

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, I

finds

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this

argument somewhat compelling points since mass big corporations advertising in

sport

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tournaments can help them increase the numbers of both potential domestic and international customers

coming

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their

products

,

this

is largely contribute

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into

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economic

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the economic

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growth of

nation

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. Another significant advantage is that allowing big

companies

participating

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in

sport

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sports

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events

can split the cost of organizations or transmit motivation to

players

. If one tournament has some good

players

or

get

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championship

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league, large corporations will express supports through several gift or money, which

companies

donate for impressive or good

players

in order to pay for preparations of the

next

tournaments or practice and equipment cost.

Furthermore

, it is seemly like a means of transport bringing footballers that become more closer with the public and they play

an

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role model in the young generation, especially fashion, lifestyle and some positive messages. In the

way

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that big

companies

use player’s

image

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images

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to put into commercials or

invited

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celebrity

players

to take part in their product TV show. In conclusion, there are several

advantageous

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advantages

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from big

corporation

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corporations

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attending

sport

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sports

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events

to

advert

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advertise

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their

products

is that increasing economic growth and sharing the cost of tournaments as well as contributing some supports as

sport

’s image and gift for

nation

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national

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team.