Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should Describe the gift Tell how it will be delivered Explain why you chose it.

Dear Jenny, I hope

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letter finds you well. I am glad to

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that news you just moved into your house in my hometown. You know

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the New York

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has more attractive places and everyone most like

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. I already bought a gift for you and I am eagerly waiting to give

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this

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beautiful present. You know

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week I went to China for my business conference while I have purchased a lot of things for my family members including you, yes I bought an ancient carving cup set for you. I know very well about my buddy taste that's why I purchased

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beautiful cup. I hope you will like most than me.

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weekend I will come and visit your new house, I am very excited to see you after a long time

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face-to-face while I will give my present to you. One day I will be a delivery girl for my lovable friend. I would be grateful if you will arrange

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your time schedule for us, we will have fun. I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Best regards, Tiffany.

reanudeepan

Nov 3, 2021

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

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7 paragraphs

192 words

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