Your friend has just moved to a new house. Write a letter to your friend and let him know about the gift that you have prepared for him/her. In your letter, you should Describe the gift Tell how it will be delivered Explain why you chose it.

Dear Jenny, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I am glad to
heard
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that news you just moved into your house in my hometown. You know
this
the New York
city
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has more attractive places and everyone most like
this
. I already bought a gift for you and I am eagerly waiting to give
this
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beautiful present. You know
last
week I went to China for my business conference while I have purchased a lot of things for my family members including you, yes I bought an ancient carving cup set for you. I know very well about my buddy taste that's why I purchased
this
beautiful cup. I hope you will like most than me.
This
weekend I will come and visit your new house, I am very excited to see you after a long time
in
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face-to-face while I will give my present to you. One day I will be a delivery girl for my lovable friend. I would be grateful if you will arrange
the
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your time schedule for us, we will have fun. I look forward to receiving your response as soon as possible. Best regards, Tiffany.
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