Some people says that everyone should be a vegetarian. To what extend you agree to this statement?

,well there are more
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proved about vegetable cooking is healthier. as well as we all know that vegetables are more good for energy that why some are argues that everyone has to be vegetarian. ,
personally
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I totally disagree with
this
statement in
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essay I will discuss why and give some relevant examples too.
first
of all,
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and styles are people choice and rights what they want to eat and what they have to wear ,by the way, there are some tradition culture public will only eat vegetarian
cuisine
and cook .
for instance
,in INDIA the brahmans only eat Greene
cuisine
because of their traditional culture and belive
therefore
there is a fact is there they were too healthy than other communities of
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in addition
for that ,some public more likely non-veg and fast
cuisine
mainly Muslim and Cristian community they were too favour of non-veg feed mainly in festivals time ,
for example
, easter,Christmas,eid , baked Ramzan, and
also
most of the Muslims celebrate all Fridays with cooking some good non-veg cooking and wear white cloth ,
however
, in
this
globe every human is different in their culture and taste of
cuisine
so in the universe have their own autonomous in wear clothes and feed snack
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depends on their favour
secondly
, we can see that nowadays most people are trying to become vegetarian because of some fitness issue,
for
instance
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those who are suffering some energy problems the doctor will prefer some medicine and
also
their menu of feed to change to eat more vegetables in their daily life and
also
most of the new restaurants are providing veg meat and dishes because they got of number of customers like to serve veg
cuisine
to sum up,some peoples prefer everyone has to be vegetarian because the strength problems will reduce ,
on the other hand
, most of the community can not accept that in
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and once again I
am disagree
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with
this
statement because the public has their own fav and rights to eat foodstuff nobody can force them to change or rights too .
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