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some people think that robots are very important to humans future development while others think they are dangerous and have negative effects on society . discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is known, nowadays, that
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 with artificial intelligence (AI) are vitally important in many spheres.
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, it is debatable whether they will help to develop a future for humans or they will be dangerous for humankind. In the forthcoming paragraphs, I will elaborate on both opinions and propose my own position on the issue. On the one hand, people are afraid of
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 plenty of failures. In fact, sometimes it is impossible to interpret and understand
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' behaviours, and
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, engineers can not trust
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 to the full extent.
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, it is essential to have interpreted AI predictions in high-risk domains like medicine because it could help humans
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rely on these predictions.
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 when
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 fail it could potentially lead to false cancer detection if people trusted
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. I acknowledge these serious worries about
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 but I still believe that a well-organised pipeline with experts and AI would have minimum failures. 
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, we already use
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 in our everyday life. As long as we use personal computers we unconsciously use AI applications.
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, a weather prediction is based on AI,
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,
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 artificial intelligence as well.
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, our smartphones are
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 that help us to find out our geolocation, calculate the best roadway, and blur a background from our portrait pictures. I am a computer vision engineer,
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, I see how these applications simplify our lives. In conclusion, I would say that there are some worries about
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 throughout the public like the low level of AI interpretation.
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,
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 undoubtedly improve our lives via AI applications, which in my opinion, will develop humans' future.

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Ensure that you address both views equally and provide more specific examples to support your points.
coherence cohesion
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lexical resource
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grammatical range
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • automation
  • artificial intelligence (AI)
  • efficiency
  • productivity
  • hazardous environments
  • personalized learning
  • job displacement
  • economic inequality
  • social unrest
  • privacy concerns
  • surveillance capabilities
  • malfunction
  • reliance
  • technical failures
  • human skills
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